Wednesday, August 26, 2015

No Tears For Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stare not at tongues of flame and cry.
I do not burn nor did I die.
I am the blessed breeze that blows
The precious pearl that holds its glows;
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Robert Dummett
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Sochukwu Ivye 05 October 2017

Great piece depicting great self-confidence. The message, the metre and rhyme scheme were carried through and through. Rating: 10

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Richard Johnson 31 August 2015

Lovely structure of words with good form and music. Appreciated. Richard

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Kelly Kurt 26 August 2015

A beautiful poem, Robert. Thanks for sharing

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Robert Louis Dummett 26 August 2015

Your feedback was much appreciated Kelly.

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