Wednesday, January 14, 2009

~no Tears~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

she hides under covers afraid of the dark
shadows on the wall such a lasting mark
she tries to be brave and sheds no tear
Look inside you see nothing but fear
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Amanda Seltrecht
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Greenwolfe 1962 29 January 2009

This poem has a great two line ending. It also has a good beginning. This makes it a good poem. The story is a good one. Well presented. GW62

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