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I have to be acustommed to the phaenomenon of breaking the verse to enjoy your potery.

so tender poem with lovely and musical images! what is A PERSIAN RAPTURE - yandex showed Sylvain Reynard. is it this meant? then I've read Eidolons by Walt Whitman. Oh! it impressed me a lot! great goal the seer gives to a poet: Put in thy chants said he, No more the puzzling hour nor day, nor segments, parts, put in, Put first before the rest as light for all and entrance-song of all, That of eidolons. It also reminded Daniil Andreev's many-dimensional visions and images.

Excellent poem. Loved the imagery and the topic delivered with fine poetic skills. Thank you for sharing.

Beautifully written Daniel well done

What a beautiful poem! This is poetry at the core. Thank you Daniel for sharing. Tushar