Thursday, April 16, 2020

No Such Thing As Human Being Any More Comments

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One moonless midnight,
Perched on a tree
Were two ghosts, one said looking at me:
Look here who goes there,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 April 2020

Another amazing humorous write. Highly imaginative and compelling imagery. Brilliantly crafted. Liked reading it.I can still vividly see the 2 ghosts perched on a tree.

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Thank you very much Pathakji for this satire. Who knows the future of mankind. Let us be selfish and pray

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 April 2020

I MUST PRAISE THE SENSE OF humour that so many appreciate why should I alone fall off the line of humour you propagate I always love to read what is on your plate

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Louis Rams 16 April 2020

nature sees and hears all as does the birds upon the trees

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 April 2020

You have brilliantly expressed the humor through the story of conversation of one moonless midnight and tree. This poem is very cleverly and excellently penned.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

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