No Such Thing Comments

Curse of loneliness is difficult to bear. 'Why must loneliness conjure up such fears? When I feel alone, with no direction, I need but look into my pool of tears, And I'm comforted by my reflection' - So poignantly expressed!

line one: quadruple h! ! ! you win the gold medal of alliterations! ! ! When I feel alone, with no direction, I need but look into my pool of tears, And I'm comforted by my reflection................i prefer using a mirror, but, yeah, my reflection is also............................................................................comforting! But how do we bear the pain? you may ask, ...............maybe a period, not comma? hee-hee. i like the abab scheme. it seems to not work so well when i accidentally (or on purpose) use that abab. you are soooooooooooooooooooo good! bri :) of course, to MyPoemList.

Thank you, Lora, for sharing such an exquisite piece of poetry which brings the both pain and the pleasure at the same time to a lonely heart. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks again. I cry 'I love you' to the distant hills, And some phantom lover echoes my call What joy as I'm freed of despair's fetter

I can feel the loneliness palpably. Good one! !