No Star I Can See Comments

Moped sky..I stare And stare all night. The caged breeze, The starless sky And night, none can share My loneliness....magnificent poetic expression. A wonderful poem.......top score.

In boundless darkness still I do not able to see stars around me through window. Still I hope to fill darkness with bright stars. Very interesting imagery is drawn definitely. Nice sharing.....10

That star was the light at the end of a dark day sadness with gladness great to read...regards

Great poem. One STAR that can actually do it is GOD. Hold on to His garment

Brilliant, touching, sad and mortal. A wonderful write. I hope you find your star!

Very impressive beauty in stars can express many things I see in stars as a new world a light that can guide our ways.

love this one , very emotional ant touching,

Well written! I like the hope/light at the end. Very nice. Thanks for recommending. Williams, T.

there is darkness in the beginning and light at the end, thats the job of an artist, to find a solution, lovely..liked it..loved it...: :)

Beautiful poem, good imagery of loneliness.

I am drowned in your sea of loneliness, but wait i saw a flicker of light from a distance. This could be the star you are searching for! You write so well i can feel i am near you in that window. Keep writing NN your work is always something to look forward to. All the best!

Look there Nilakshi, there is a new born star..could be a new hope for life...Even there's no star be it as yourself..shine and bright others....so nice to share...i can feel this poem though, keep writing NIl! _Unwritten Soul

Great! .... Don't understand it to its fullest but d construction just makes it loveable to read.... Nice job! ;)

Oh Nilakishi, this is absolutely beautiful, it is breathtaking and I feel so much when I read this. Only one star that is upon you with its Divine Light it shines through you in its completeness. Always! :) Love

The piece is great Nilakshi, I like it. The arrangement, pattern and formation is brilliant. However, I'd have to scrutinize the lines pretty well to be able to underscore constructive criticism. P.S. I think you may add a little hyperbolic contrast; 'My loneliness on my sleepless pillows, I know there...'