Thursday, June 11, 2009

No Smoking Page 2 Comments

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You must know and accept in your heart that there is reason to live
I want time with you, quality time, for this life has so much to give
No tubes attached to oxygen tanks into your nose to carry around
Pumping and hissing, making a loud, unnatural sound
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Shashendra Amalshan 25 August 2009

Hey I don't smoke as such.. but I know many people who destroyed their life in going in this path, smoking and alcohol., . which also include my father. very much addicted to these things, which ultimately let to his destruction.. this again is very well written.. I have an addiction to video games though...., it is no better that drug addiction.. i mean I love virtual world better than the real world... that is the case.. Like to live in those fantasy worlds, .. filled with magic, my poems are all surreal too.. sometimes feel, real life, is not as exciting and adventurous as that.. this is good.. lovess shan

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Louis Rams 20 August 2009

i think nikunj said it clearly, the ashes we are seeing are our own falling to the ground.

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Nikunj Sharma 16 July 2009

hardly do we realise that the ashes we dropp dont belong to cigarettes...... they are very much ours years after years we shall see you smoked nothing she smoked thee

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