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“No smile for you“
“No lift for you”
“No place and not even an inch”
“Do not dream as such”
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My dear Hasmukh Bhai. It's wonderful. Your poem reminds of John Keats. You are romantic even at this age! Really great. KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343 Dec 04,2013
Wow jessica moore21 minutes ago I love it. Just they way you write is so beautiful. This poem has such a nice rhythm, and such meaning. Thank you for sharing! Comment 0 Dear Hasmukh
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Dana Bell18 minutes ago but I didn't see any consistency in the rhyming until the end and I think it made this poem suffer. I did like the content of your poem
“No smile for you“ “No lift for you” “No place and not even an inch” “Do not dream as such”
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Wonderful write, Hasmukh jee! All emotional feelings were expressed beautifully....Nice poem.. Padmavathi, Secunderabad Dec 04,2013