Friday, June 12, 2015

No Shelter For A Sparrow Comments

Rating: 4.5

Worst is when you want to cry
when there is no reason.
It's just a summer passing by,
like any other season.
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Philip Dodd
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Chinedu Dike 12 June 2015

A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with depth of insight. A philosophical poem written in poetic diction with conviction. I like the rhyme scheme of the piece. Indeed, there is no shelter for a sparrow. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 12 June 2015

A lovely poem, Phillip. Thanks

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The plight of sparrow is so beautifully narrated in the poem and it likes.

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