No Sense Of Proportion Comments

I said, 'too prosaic', but I didn't say I didn't like it. BUT - I would have liked it more if it were less prosaic.

Interesting story, but the writing is too prosaic, although I suppose you could say it's a prose poem.

and so the truth is distorted...it is the artist who has been chosen to see beyond reality to the spirit, for better or worse...and the truth is what we see...Coach