Thursday, December 22, 2016

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Kayanja Ronald Edwin
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Lantz Pierre 22 December 2016

I find this piece to be strangely compelling. It seems so straight forward and yet still somehow just beyond the full grasp of my intelligence. It forces me to keep re-reading it, looking for the moment where it bursts into flames in my imagination. In part I think that it strikes me as a fragment that's been lifted out of a larger piece, or is in search of bigger context. But no matter, it stands alone and still works its magic.

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Kayanja Ronald Edwin 22 December 2016

thanks Lantz for your kind and sincere comment. I have been trying some brevity writing, one stanza poems with a great essence like a hungover to leave the reader in wonder there is no larger piece but so glad you mentioned that it still stands alone thank you again

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