Saturday, December 21, 2013

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In biting dying days of cold December,
There came Joseph and Mary one late night,
Knocking at bolted doors of an old inn,
Nine months with unborn Christ and in great plight.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Christopher Moore 21 December 2013

A complex and heart felt writing... :)

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 January 2019

I revisited this poem with the same Christmas spirit that made me write it. And I saw your feedback. My apologies for not acknowledging earlier. While I thank you, pray tell me what made this poem complex as you so felt. It may help me improve.

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