No Room For Tears Comments
After ordering the stone,
gold letters on granite,
she would sit by the window
and watch the sun roll
...
Read full text
This poem has it all...intense emotion suppressed succinctly, visual images painted clearly, drama expressed without tears, and a great conclusion. Good work, Herbert! Raynette
Intense image.....I could see her puffing away on that cigarette.....great write!
What an image! Great poem Herbert. The Camel (no filters) , zippo lighter, and the glass of Jack Daniels really got me......Those were three of my dad's favorite things. Sincerely, Mary
Narrative poetry I hate. But this I like. It's splendid. Well done, Herr Doktor.
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
8/13/2025 11:02:56 PM # 1.0.0
Very moving Herbert, makes me shudder. Sincerely Ernestine.