No Remedy Comments

Is it a new tendency in poetry to cut off the verse ''no//remedy'', vomit//out, hospital// visits, hurts//bad, rain//falls, much//worse ? In classical poetry one never finds the phaenomenon.In Homer for example, I think, it is only once the case met.

Was it after a funny party at school? Grown ups are always more cynic.

I read it with much muse and fun.. Well selected diction and good organization. God bless you