No regrets
By Sharon Maria Moemise
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Congrats, a sweet melody, a poem on deception in love, a painting of human emotions.
This could be put to music and made into a great song. Well done and congratulations on having it selected as poem of the day!
Thank you so much, Kim. I did actually write it as a lyrical type poem.
Love dripping thick from lines. Your love is sublime and will remain forever fresh. Makes a nice reading. Thanks for sharing and congrats.
Many stories between lines. despite bitter pasts, love never goes stale. Very touching poem. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X
It still hurts looking back! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thank you for choosing my poem as Member poem of the day
a lovely poem of feelings felt at a time of so much everlasting love? ..............well written
This is such a beautiful poetry....great flow...simple and heart touching Thank you
its a really good work done by you.. every line explains its meaning by itself
Such a powerful poem you have written... congrats on being chosen, Sharon...Rated 10+++++ You may visit my HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST, BATHE YOUR HEART, BECAUSE I LOVE HER, TAKE TIME TO THINK, and A HAPPY MARRIAGE...👍
Marriage indeed was meant to last forever. Loaded with a love that lingers long after loss and leaps into the lane of liberty where resides no regrets. Well done my friend! Congrats! I celebrate with you on the day your poem was chosen as member poem of the day!
I thank you from the bottom of my heart for your great comment
No regrets and no signs of bitterness which can linger through a broken marriage. Your words are straight from the heart. I hope your heart and your life have moved on. Thank You
Though relationship broke, you still carry the love with you, which gives you energy to go forward without regrets.Thanks for sharing.
You repeat the lines I LOVED YOU THEN / I LOVE YOU NOW three times, but it feels as if you repeated them even more because that sentiment permeates your poem. There is a lingering sadness about the failure of this love to prevail but as your title shows, you are not giving in to negative emotions, especially not playing a BLAME GAME. I have the feeling this relationship helped you gow as an individual and it is that new individual who wrote this poem that sheds its light on so many of us with similar experiences. That's the way a truthful poem like yours nudges our lives forward when we take it inside our hearts and minds. It conveys healing energy.
Thank you for understanding the sentiment, and for your encouraging comment.
The poem brings out the sad images of a relationship gone sour but there is some hope: I loved you then / I love you now / Feels like way back when / You and I made our vow
I find your love was lyrical....and you and your lover were two parts of a lyre.......lovely lyric by a lovely one who loves to love for ever.... .....good rhyme scheme..... ......bidding congratulation........ .NURUL
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. Very encouraging.
Nicely written passionate poem... It's very much relavant to this crone marital system.... I enjoyed reading it Like this stanza: I was queen to your Kingdom I could never asked for me Ifor I knew what tomorrow'd bring I'd dance to life's encore I vote 10