Tuesday, June 28, 2016

No Regret In Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

No guilt no regret if it pure love from the inner heartbeat No proposal to purpose when it stop by someone in between When option has to be refuse is against the will of others Vows of May you take my hand or the words of I do never seem to meet Or never been hear at first exchanged of ring's never been place purpose of proposal in her present of her love That ain't meet the beginning when hope seeming to be hopeless

He loves her purest but can't take the risk for her she loves him purest she passed through humid summer though heavy dust through the rain that clears the skylight when it stops to shower above the high sky Just to be with him He left her with emptying feelings He shatters her much too far through the wound That he mark her heart with agony She loves him the same way in the present of her past She grows apart that distance her from him in healing that overcomes that ease the agony That no longer be feel Love existed either it's a trial either it happily ever after Forgive is the healing that moves you through Real first love is a trial either end up together either slip away
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Kelly Kurt 28 June 2016

The English was a little rough in parts but a very nice poem, Putri. Thanks

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