Thursday, June 2, 2011

No Questions, No Answers! ! ! Comments

Rating: 4.8

Does your heart dance, looking into my dancing eyes?
Do your lips tremble, listening to my tear-stained cries?
Does your being want to hold me close as I do?
Will you be eternally mine, as I have already sworn to?
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Nidhi Dev
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Liliana Roman 03 November 2011

i cant say anything accept for... that was amazing! ! !

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 June 2011

Love is not performed it is the most spontaneous feeling and just happens. It doesn't see merits and demerits of the person whom you love. You have described it very well. Great poetry. A fine 10. TFS

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Anil Kumar 05 June 2011

Hi...You have well described that 'wanting love forever' feeling....And the memory elements that are left when rejected which float around scattered in the surface of our memory also got captured well in this poem...Nice one...

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