Saturday, November 7, 2015

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Through whole night I kept awake
Fear was there to break and shake
My dummy head was just in shambles
My faith liberates and just dangles
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Musawir Raakh 07 November 2015

a classic poem, really appreciate the message, a true expression of a loyal servant or Lord, adding to my fav list, I invite you to read and rate mine

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Spock The Vegan 07 November 2015

Well written emotional poem. Thanks

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Shakil Ahmed 07 November 2015

your end rhyme is beautiful, well write, thanks for sharing,

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Abbottabad Pakistan
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