No Place To Hide Poem by Prabir Gayen

No Place To Hide

Rating: 5.0


No place to hide

You can leave the world,
Friends cruel and inhumane
neighbours,
can you forsake the favour,
Win over the desire disastrous,
In a corner can you find a place
to hide yourself,
A self-comfort zone to doze,
Where will you go
if the bed begins to bite?

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Monday, August 5, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 19 August 2019

A self-comfort zone to doze, Where will you go if the bed begins to bite? /// beautiful poetic expression

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 August 2019

This is one sweet poetry when desire strays and bed bites betray short and sweet PG LOVE HER STILL THERE IS NO ALTERNATIVE READ MY LATEST A SHY MAN RETURNS, ....today HE HAS COMPOSED A BREAST-FULL POETRY I MUST SAY HE...READ ON PL PG

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C F 05 August 2019

Solitude and self contained confidence is the answer when " the bed begins to bite" . Nice write my friend! 10+

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Julia Luber 05 August 2019

Uncanny portrayal of a problem I have been facing for years now- old friends become enemies surrounding me in my neighborhood. Touches upon the suffering this causes and that sense of where should one go…when one's 'comfort location' has been destroyed. Interesting different poem.

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Prabir Gayen 05 August 2019

Thanks dear friend.../////

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