Tuesday, October 9, 2012
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The dark is a coming will I make it another day?
Sleep won't come and the days on replay
My heart is so brittle, threatening to break all-apart
No adhesive made to mend this little heart
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Dennis Fenton
09 October 2012
This poem is well written. I do hope the Author sees the other side because there is more joy on the side with the light!
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7/23/2025 5:37:13 PM # 1.0.0
The dark is coming with no place to hide......! this recurring theme in the poem is powerful and catchy.. it sets the tone for the overall effect nice touching poem conveys the feelings well liked