Friday, April 18, 2014

No Place At Satan's Table Comments

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C and Z Team took
the good white china
from the kitchen set
out clean bowls plates
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Terence George Craddock
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Bri Edwards 27 April 2014

gee, i started to comment yesterday but got sidetracked and booted from computer (my wife's) by my wife. what nerve! ! ! now, without looking at poem, yet, again today, i think i recall that you had a unique way of running sentences/lines into one another without punctuation, making my job of following the poem more difficult! what nerve! ok, to read agaiin. ...............yeah, i was correct, and maybe a word or two seem to be in peculiar place(s) . but, once i got the hang of the style, i could follow the story well enough. sounds like a nerve-upsetting, if not stomach-upsetting event. a true story or imagination? ? C and Z still remains a bit of a mystery to me. anonymous friends? thanks for sharing. bri ;)

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