perhaps..
when i sing..
i don't sing
when i dance..
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A journey through your words labyrinth game, a twist of words with fine wise meaning. Great poem..Cristina Teodor
play of words letting out a mirage of feelings........defracting to emit so variant meanings...........liked how u used the same words to mean different each time...wow
This is a great philosophy to live by... When we do the things we love, we do it wholeheartedly, because we're good at it, it comes naturally. But talk about doing things we are not comfortable doing in front of others, it's a 'rather not' situation. But writing and loving is a private affair which we share with people we feel confident with... Marvelous poem!
i like it very much...words are executed very beautifully..good work
So much affection in this write and it claim a place of aesthetic in our mind.. a generation of love emerged and you sing and dance for us by your words, in your writing that full of love lullaby..nice write....By the way the autumn picture that i painted is not about sad Ahmed, it's about nature full of colors and colors inked our life differently...Keep writing and the love in your writing should be striking as always..Good luck n take care ur health my friend_Unwritten Soul
I think i see what your saying my friend. I would say love and writing go hand in hand. Writing clears the mind, to help you see what's Worth having in life, and love helps you live your life, with meaning and fulfilment. A great poem.
Amazing work as usual my friend, you bring a whole new meaning to Philosophy, exquisite poem! :)
Wow that's really great and inspiring! You played with the words very beautiful. Wow! It's really awesome. I can sing it, as usual my bro. you achieved at making a great work. Amazing one! :) *__^
wow! you really, really wrote an amazing poem, , well expressed indeed, , love it!
writing gives me true joy too...poetry cures me.. I totally agree with you on this...
Thanks Ahmed many of us die with our words inside...If writing is where you come alive, perhaps that's where you should reside and then you will see your words dancing on your screen/paper...I love to feel free among words! ! !
Very interesting- I had to read it a couple of times to understand but now I think it is very well expressed and very, very profound! Good job and well done! CAK
Beautiful poem, but even love needs its rewards.