Friday, November 11, 2011

No Perhaps Philosophy Comments

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perhaps..
when i sing..
i don't sing
when i dance..
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ahmed khaled
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Elke Seven 29 November 2011

Beautiful poem, but even love needs its rewards.

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Cristina Teodor 25 November 2011

A journey through your words labyrinth game, a twist of words with fine wise meaning. Great poem..Cristina Teodor

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Soulful Heart 24 November 2011

play of words letting out a mirage of feelings........defracting to emit so variant meanings...........liked how u used the same words to mean different each time...wow

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Eriobu Christabel 14 November 2011

NICE ONE U GOT THERE!

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Benjamin Paa Willie 13 November 2011

Bravo! Every line of this poem is my favourite line

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Jacqui Broad 13 November 2011

This is a great philosophy to live by... When we do the things we love, we do it wholeheartedly, because we're good at it, it comes naturally. But talk about doing things we are not comfortable doing in front of others, it's a 'rather not' situation. But writing and loving is a private affair which we share with people we feel confident with... Marvelous poem!

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Paul Brookes 12 November 2011

Very insightful poem I liked it

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Neagu Geta 12 November 2011

wow..is very deep the message od this poem..i love it..

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Dead Leaf 12 November 2011

i like it very much...words are executed very beautifully..good work

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Unwritten Soul 11 November 2011

So much affection in this write and it claim a place of aesthetic in our mind.. a generation of love emerged and you sing and dance for us by your words, in your writing that full of love lullaby..nice write....By the way the autumn picture that i painted is not about sad Ahmed, it's about nature full of colors and colors inked our life differently...Keep writing and the love in your writing should be striking as always..Good luck n take care ur health my friend_Unwritten Soul

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Dave Walker 11 November 2011

I think i see what your saying my friend. I would say love and writing go hand in hand. Writing clears the mind, to help you see what's Worth having in life, and love helps you live your life, with meaning and fulfilment. A great poem.

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Crimson Love 11 November 2011

Amazing work as usual my friend, you bring a whole new meaning to Philosophy, exquisite poem! :)

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Abdallah Gamal 11 November 2011

Wow that's really great and inspiring! You played with the words very beautiful. Wow! It's really awesome. I can sing it, as usual my bro. you achieved at making a great work. Amazing one! :) *__^

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 11 November 2011

wow! you really, really wrote an amazing poem, , well expressed indeed, , love it!

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hdhd dudjf 11 November 2011

writing gives me true joy too...poetry cures me.. I totally agree with you on this...

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Emu Getachew 11 November 2011

Thanks Ahmed many of us die with our words inside...If writing is where you come alive, perhaps that's where you should reside and then you will see your words dancing on your screen/paper...I love to feel free among words! ! !

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Claudia Krizay 11 November 2011

Very interesting- I had to read it a couple of times to understand but now I think it is very well expressed and very, very profound! Good job and well done! CAK

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