No Other Way But... Comments

The sun goes down- -casting a red-eyed glance of resignation painting the sky- -Beautifully deone!

To give in! With no alternative. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

You are never verbose...! I love your thrift use of words and your images commune so much Nosheen! A sure 10

You link two things that are so far apart and so different in scale: first, the massive sun surrendering to night in a blaze of red light; and then a solitary lonely person surrendering to yet another night alone. And we realize what is happening in that single person's heart is every bit as great as a star's events. There is an infinity of feeling in each of us which rivals the movement of celestial bodies.

You are an expert in writing very short and yet very riveting poems. God bless. (10)

I feel something same in this poem and 'love gave me not' very nice this one too

For rebirth with freshness this resignation is must else who will notice the good work done by the sun? Wo jo hai uski ahmiyat kahan, jab chala jaaye yaad bahut aaye.....A thought provoking poem Nosheen.10++.

Saanj dhale gagan tale hum kitne ekaaki... We all are alone fighting our own demons. Nature plays a strong role in manipulating our distorted thoughts. brilliant piece of writing. Nothing less then 10.

Hi Nosheen, In everybody's life, there are occasions when there is no other way - - - - - but to give in to darkness. Beautiful poem. What I learn of Nosheen is that, of late, she has become very novel and inventive! Congrats Nosheen.10 for this exciting number.

To the point. Sometimes there is indeed no choice.