Thursday, November 28, 2019

No Other Way Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love me,
Let me love,
Lead me, or
Follow me,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Aniruddha Pathak 30 November 2019

No Other Way, Originally I wrote this as a couplet, which on a whim I changed into this form and to my surprise the readers/poets liked it.

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Anjandev Roy 30 November 2019

Lovely piece. Fine to read. Thank u, dear poet.anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 November 2019

Thank you dear poet for reading and liking it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 November 2019

Love me or, leave me! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 November 2019

In a way, yes, love me or leave me, Thanks for visiting.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 November 2019

A powerful poem of love. Perceptive and so true. Liked reading. It.

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 November 2019

Thanks dear poet, your feedback is uplifting, for, it was experimental.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 November 2019

'Thanks dear poet, your feedback is uplifting, for, it was experimental.' Correction... There might be room for confusion, the above should read: Thanks dear poet, your feedback is uplifting, for, my poem was experimental.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2019

Lovely poem. Simple and stunning. Love is love, beautifully penned.

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 November 2019

I think simple things if made effective are always stunning. Thanks for your feedback, dear KM.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 November 2019

A lovely work sir! Loved reading it......10+++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 November 2019

Thanks, I was wondering if I can write the so-called modern poem. But I still have a reserved mixed feelings. Thanks for 10+++

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 November 2019

Love me, Let me love, Lead me, or Follow me, i have no other way. in this poem you become a very young poet in your attitude.. thank u dear Aniruddha.. tony

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 November 2019

Yes, thanks, for a 79 yr old in his second childhood (almost touching on teenage) it feels good if called 'a young poet'....And Hi, long time no see.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 November 2019

Magnificently crafted, sir Aniruddha.....10++

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 November 2019

Thank you Rev Bernard for visiting this ditty, I'd hesitate to call it a poem. Thanks for 10+

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