Wednesday, July 3, 2013

No One Was Home Comments

Rating: 4.5

It was in a Saturday afternoon that everything seemed to rhyme
As if all seasons had come back to their birth time.
A piano man played a trick from the back of the hedge,
The sun fed flower caught his act but listened to his pledge.
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Debanjan Dhar
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Heather Wilkins 17 July 2013

many times there is no one at home. you have incorporated a lot of good imagery in your poem. nice write

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