Tuesday, July 8, 2008

No-One Seemed To Care Comments

Rating: 5.0

She's looking through a window,
Stairing at a sky.
Her heart is slowly breaking,
She cannot help but cry.
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Kirstin Barnes
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Matt Dahan 08 July 2008

This is a great poem i can relate to this. i understand were your writtings comming from

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Stephanie Rivers 08 July 2008

I think this is pretty good. I am new to this poetry thing, so I'm not a tough critic, but from a novice perspective, its nice. I can relate to this poem. I like sad and inspirational poems the most. Good job :)

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Catherine Rica Cosico 08 July 2008

So sad Kirstin.......If all seemes no one cares to us, there is a great being who cares all the time.....He who a great hand that helps us in times of need...He who lights up our way in our darkest hours. Just open up your door and let Him enter your heart and soul...The One up there, He'll never make you wander. Cate

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