Thursday, January 4, 2007

No One Left Behind Comments

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Everyone gathering all at once. Let's hurry up because Im hungry for lunch. Everyone get in the car so we can be on our way to the store we call Lays.
'Is everyone in the car? ' Yes, yes, yes. Ok now we'll be on our way. Are you guys sure everyone's here? Yes mom everyone's here. Ok I just wanna make sure again. 'Wait a minute guys we are missing someone, Annie's not here! ! She was sleep when we left.'
'Just don't worry about it mom, we're almost there.' 'No! I can't go anywhere without my daughter. Im turning this car around and I don't care how mad you guys are! '
(Speeding down the highway trying to get home. Annie wakes up and notices everyone's gone) She calls her aunt Betty and explains to her what's going on. Betty soon realize's that Annie shouldn't be alone.
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Aldo Kraas 05 January 2007

Not a bad poem In life we are always in a hurry People have no patience any more Even when you are crossing the roads Sometimes they try to force you to run as quickly as you can To avoid being hit So I think the real lesson To human beings Are that patience is a virtue

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