Thursday, October 20, 2011

No One Knows Comments

Rating: 5.0

no one knows about my lies
when i say i am fine
no one knows about the hurt inside
how a smile covers it all up
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Kevin East 09 December 2011

Wonderful raw and a soul laid bare. Well done sp..the very best from you again.

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Romeo Della Valle 20 October 2011

Fortunately, you just did that (open up) by posting this straightforward and well penned write! Outburst of the heart! I love it! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more such powerful writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Ben Burger 20 October 2011

This poem seems to be brutally honest and come from real life, it is interesting insight to you

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