Monday, June 15, 2009

No One Knows Comments

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Everyone keeps there distance
No one knows when you fall out of existence
Dying inside and living in a dream
Lost inside tearing at the seams
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Brooke Ashlyn
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Kieran J96 29 July 2010

i can relate to this, u seeem to capture how so many people feel

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Nikunj Sharma 12 August 2009

Kill a dream and steal a smile End this life that once was an innocent child Nice poem, written from heart..........gud work. Pls spare time and read mine as well

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Shekhar Joshi 18 June 2009

i can almost identify with this poem.........no one caring and knowing or tryin to know about how bad your condition is......... excellent poem...

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