No One Knows Comments

yes know one knows but we all have a choices to make it better or not. well penned my friend

Penetrating piercing questions posed perfectly, you’ll have me pondering for weeks over this beautiful poem.

lovely poem and puts light on the truth of life a. very honest questions you have asked. and the answrers to them are unknown to all. thanks for sharing.

a gr8 poem...beautifully written

One of your best in my opinion, good flow and as always very profound, 10 Lynda xx

Interesting poem but most definitely true. love it =]

that was very good and I couldn't have said it better myself what a way to go keep it up.

Life is full of riddles-very well said.a ten from me.

Yes! No one knows what lies ahead for us, but it also depends on us how we handle things right...What we have planted yesterday, how we nurture today is what we are going to harvest tomorrow....Great composition. a 10.

I love your poetic talent. Your poems flow like a natural spring. I respond to it in the following lines: Sun might burn but she keeps warm, She is the moonlight, does no harm. Breeze is cool but in winter it chills, Rose withers, her scent goes up hills. I am clay but in her poetry I delight, Heaven is dull, I love hope’s flight. Life is bubble, deep calm death flows, Those who dive deep very well know.

what a beautiful well written piece this is...thank you for sharing it with me....

Your rhymes add music to this lovely enigmatic piece.I agree with Tsira. Only God knows... Warmest regards, Sandra

wow! philosopher nightingle! real new taste! 10++++

Great idea; well composed. But I doubt; should not the lines start as 'Is Sun better.........Is Moon better..........' like that. 10

Yes you correctly speak, only he one - the god knows the answer in all... 10... Tsira

Simple words, meaningful thought, wise poem! 10

A very simple yet deep poem. No one knows how true that is. well done

:) good one. Nice..Brief Composition.