Sunday, June 17, 2012

No One Has A Perfect Life. Comments

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She's known for her kindness,
She's known for her looks,
always wears a smile,
always with a friend,
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Okoronkwo Jackson Jonathan 04 October 2012

I love the note you dropped on the poem. And for the poem, a very good lesson to learn from. Hey tell me you've experienced much! Anyway just joking. Permit me in this short cantos appreciate the dropping of thy words like the sweet humming of the birds chanting the early morning serenades. Never mind. Great work you have there.

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Dominic Hontonnu 22 June 2012

i like it n hey hope U¯_??° will read mine thanks

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Kevin Halls 21 June 2012

A good insight into human life, we all show a different face in different situations and meeting new people. And all have secrets too! Nice poem.

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Tolulope Modupe 20 June 2012

Wow! I really love this poem..it shows the true nature of humanity..

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Wang Qian 18 June 2012

I like your sensitive intuition on your words, description, and your feeling towards people and life~~ Thank you for sharing!

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Saadat Tahir 18 June 2012

she fits the other shoe of! ............... Cinderella, , , , , :) isnt it so liked yer impressive lil monologue cheers

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Impressive penning...fine display of textbook free-verse

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Impressive display of free-verse...textbook job! ~FjR~

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