Thursday, July 28, 2022

No One Can Understand Them Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once a pon a time, there lived Lucas and Tom.
They were walking through the forest to find some fruits to eat.
Tom: You know what? I am going out with a girl.
Lucas: Really? Is she bad?
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Ray C.
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Bri Edwards 13 August 2022

Is this intentional, I wonder: 'Once a pon a time' (the 'a pon' [sic] part I mean) This line gave me a little laugh: 'No one can understand them.'

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Ray C. 05 February 2023

Hello! Sorry that I am replying kind of late. Yes, that was on purpose. I thought that it w

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Ray C. 05 February 2023

Hello! Sorry that I am replying kind of late. Yes, it was in purpose. I thought if I put apon instead of upon, it would be kind of funny. Thank you for enjoying my poem! Have a nice day!

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2. But, more often, I may fail to effectively communicate with you, even if we use the same language. Your poem highlights this fact. Congratulations. Good poem. Top score.

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M : ) 29 July 2022

Thank you so much for your nice comment! You know what I want the readers to find out. : )

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1. Hi Poet, There are thousands of languages used in the world. The very essence of the evolution and existence of a language is effective communication. (Contd)

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