It makes us to drive crazy
Even if sometimes we may act lazy
Life is what we have observed to be steady
Not at our attempts but by the grace of almighty
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THE UNREACHABLE Meriam Pasignajen Sombreno Teleron10 hours ago A man has to choose his own right way To make it sure that he may be blessed someday Not turning to evil things nor envy with evildoers. Allowing not to walk with thy own paths But let GOD step as our better-half He gave us senses to become wise enough To acknowledge thy greatness by loving us He created the natures with full of love But man destroyed it and forgot That we are all strangers in this land
Comment +1 Well done Jared Rodriguez10 hours ago exceptional delivery Comment +1 Goog message Rod Daniel10 hours ago I enjoyed this piece Comment +1 Good good flow and constant reminder of the theme of the poem.
Eric Egeland10 hours ago Keep up the effort Comment +1 An ok poem
yvonne sensing10 hours ago very creative...well done Comment +1 Decent meaning
Andrew Samonas10 hours ago There is a good flow and constant reminder of the theme of the poem.
It makes us to drive crazy Even if sometimes we may act lazy
No one is allowed to cross the limit To stay within confined wall and lovingly greet Wonderful, I enjoyed reading this poem as it pats my shoulders!