Thursday, April 20, 2006

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When the sun used to shine
through the blinds,
it would have pattern,
and the pattern would have shape,
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Mia Ocean
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Tori Ocean 27 November 2006

not bad.

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Lydia Francese 11 May 2006

Why? is a good way to end this poem, because it keeps the reader thinking avout the warning. A good read. -Lydia

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Moya Levy 21 April 2006

I like your style in this poem Mia, I like the way you see the detail. Moyaxxx

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