Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, March 10, 2013

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O, moon you are no where
Not even fit to shine and go near
She is one among the top and best
Try her in any form, she stands the test
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 March 2013

Shi Ricks Walker lovely write. 2 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 March 2013

Subramanian Ganapathy Sure. Eternity is in her lips and eyes.Bliss in her brow's bent. 7 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 March 2013

Siam M'Backe she is beauty~full and belongs to GOD and his holy prophet (saws) , she is kind and marked with grace and softness! eye like her! eye don't KNOW her, but (eye) dO! 3 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 March 2013

Busybee Sabeen her face looks so serene! ! 3 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Ayesha Nigam Innocence shining through. beautiful poem on her! 3 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2013

Jane Lynahan Karklin, Tonya Brown-Lyman and 2 others like this. Tonya Brown-Lyman ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL.....! ! ! ! 7 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1 Opal Ingram Beautiful 5 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2013

Seen by 6 Subramanian Ganapathy likes this. Subramanian Ganapathy What a beauty! A ravishingly cloying attempt! I have falen in love with the poem! 2 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Subramanian Ganapathy Is this the face that launched a thousand ships? 2 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2013

Jen Walls and Anowar Hossain like this. Jen Walls Beautiful in subtle expression of such beauty. Very nice dear Hasmukh about an hour ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2013

Many aspects shared John Staub10 hours ago Good way of expressing the many aspects of a serious relationship. Comment +1 Amazing Liane Alene10 hours ago This is so maturely written and I really got into it. Great job! Comment +1 Well done.........Enjoyable read, Hasmukh Tom Kennedy10 hours ago Keep writring Comment +1 needs work it and but Robert Ingalls10 hours ago overall pretty good Comment +1 It's ok. Key'Chera Allen10 hours ago The first few lines were a bit odd but it got a little better.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2013

Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago Ladya Sunny, Daniela Voicu and 2 others like this. Ramesh Rai Divine 14 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Reply +1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago Daniela Voicu Beautiful! 13 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Reply +1 Less than a minute ago Ladya Sunny I love all poem bout moon 13 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1 Reply +1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago Pawan Jain, Anita Rathi and 4 others like this. Pawan Jain She is one among the top and best Try her in any form, she stands the test.....awesome lines 9 hours ago · Like · 1 Some Girl This reads beautifully, the final stanza closes nicely too Reply +1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago Some Girl This reads beautifully, the final stanza closes nicely too

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2013

Dignified way of if having her and going closer

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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