Wednesday, April 16, 2014

No Nirvana Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shop-chopping channels on reclining settees
My brain sliver catnaps; occupy a couch potatoes chore
Extremities languish to spellbinding phosphorescence
Retinas spoon-fed delectable junk food of hyperactive molds:
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 August 2022

kevin this is an excellent write

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 May 2014

Phew all these scenes frm the media n telly? Gory n lurid but wrapped up in admirable grandiloquence of expression. I love grandiloquent terminology since if we dont use those words then who should? All words r there for the using but only talented poets like u can create a sublime poem out of them. Yeah nirvana is impossible since it is not compelling and is not frm the omnipotent one true God, rather is a human exhortation. Tnx n regards kev.

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