No, Never, Not In This World….. Comments

(cont.) I was finished when he started i think you mean that, from the start of the relationship, you were fated to be 'broken' by it/him. and now you don't plan to 'fall' or 'break' again. see that you DON'T! ! ! BUT maybe you will, and then you can try to be even MORE careful the next time. i HOPE and think that you again will 'hold a hand'. bri :) to MyPoemList.

my favorite of your lines: It's not me it's him who missed the moon while counting stars. i would make some minor changes in the English, but shall/will not bother to mention now; ask me if you want to hear my suggestions. 4th line: i'm not sure if you mean hold or told. either one is ok with me. :) (cont.)

Will not fall, will not scatter and will not be broke again No never, not in this life I will hold any hand again I tried, I cried and this time I finally forgive.....missing the moon while counting stars...... beautiful expressions. painful experiences and the thoughts and convictions and determinations that lead to decision..... a fine poem. tony

The most beautiful lines in this praiseworthy poems are as I feel... That hello didn't even promised a goodbye My destination was a journey for him Wow Ruchi, keep it up. You are a modern poet indeed. 10+++++