Was there a need,
For thou,
To say I’m sorry.
thou called me divine,
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Wow factor poem indeed...I feel it so religous as a desciple would speak to his flock speaking very meaningful words...extreme goodness here from the heart...+++++10 mmmm Saint Anjali sounds right; wink wink
The intensity of emotions has been captured exceedingly well.
Emotional, aint you! You write really, really well Those powerful feelings, like a searchlight.. made me wake up Awake And a grimace in pain!
that was a lovely poem..full of emotions..gives a thirst for that true love
Thirsty needs water, not water thirsty. You're right, Anjali, but you might wish to consider too that water does indeed need thirsty for it to be water. Without thirsty water might not be water anymore, it would be something else that does not quench your thirst. You need love, yes; but I bet love also needs you for you do personify what love is all about. What if there is an equation that Anjali = love, and love = Angeli, how about that? Can you beat rthat? Mark
The title attracted me (you know why) . This is a magnificent poem, written with a whimsical Shakespearen charm.
yeah sorry is needded.we should say sry.....heheh well abt the poem what would i say all have given the comments and mine is just saying love it..........
No need to beseech me for love, Thy trove always be filled Under the canopy of my wide heart. divine
Anjali, love is innocent, like a child, just give smile, not your profile, needs no style, doesn't beguile, move many miles
Just as thirsty needs water And not water needs thirsty, Likewise I needed your love And not love needed me................love simply glorified by enlighted soul, superb write,10+++++, thanks for sharing
Eloquently expressed by a dialogue that is both deep and delightful. Very well written.10/10
Looks like you had a personal message for someone. Like the thou and Shakespearean style..very mystrious
My favorite in this poem is the last stanza
Yes; we realize there is no need!