Friday, September 28, 2012

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The world is spinning
tilted backwards
like the morning paper
I'm thrown out the day after
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Sara Gosa
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Saif Ali 15 October 2012

That's good, I am trying to realize by heart. Thanks

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Ronn Michael Salinas 28 September 2012

Hmm the last line could be stronger, less vague... just a suggestion :)

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