Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, September 21, 2012

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Rating: 5.0

It may remain mystery till the end
As life may near to its ultimate bend
It may offer no more solution
Only curse with helpless resolution
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 September 2012

neverending drkgbalakrishnan kandangath19 minutes ago i like the Arabian Nights Comment +1 Powerful Theme

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 September 2012

Matthew Mainhart12 minutes ago Love the theme and flow you built here. I think the rhyme actually got in the way at points as it felt forced but the theme and emotion is enough to carry this above average. Comment +1 great

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 September 2012

Jack Noonan15 minutes ago loved it nice flow

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 September 2012

It may remain mystery till the end As life may near to its ultimate bend

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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