No More Than This Comments

as Khairul (see below) is such a good judge of fine poetry....[[after all, he DOES appreciate (at least) some of mine! ]].....AND as i was going to do it anyway, i will now place this mistresspiece into July 2018's showcase, as an example of poems on PH having the topic love. Thanks, my dear poet(ess) . bri :)

Such a sweet poem, I haven't read in many years! Love the format you almost always follow- four lines, rhyming ABAB. Loved the last two lines of stanza # 4&5. 10/10 from me.

(cont.) ... Yes, my dear friend, do not give him money, a car, or your PH password! you are 'giving him' ENOUGH! Maybe stick a comma between me and to here: You need only ask me to claim them; i 'love' stanza #4 the most. WONDERFUL! and, as usual, the rhyming is impeccable! the last line gave me a LITTLE laugh when i read it the 2nd or 3rd time. bri ;)

(cont.) ..., you have fooled Bri with this superb poem. it is a bit of a switch. now you are visiting HIM! not he visiting you. and it sounds like you have everything under control.....though i hear no mention of condom! ; ( (cont.) ..

(cont.) ..HERE IS MY AFTER-READING-THE-POEM COMMENT: so, NOW IT IS TIME for me to read the poem and see how well i've done with my prediction of its content! ! btw, to MyPoemList, ........i suppose. (cont.) ...

No comment yet? ? ? ! ! ! Enough of it! No More OF This..no comment garbage! ! ! i will, and shall, and MUST comment. first i'll write a comment BEFORE READING this poem; i've never done such a thing before, BUT your poems are (usually) predictable (enough) that i just might be able to 'pull it off'! [[ NO! not THAT! Actually, the thought of THAT is a bit 'unsettling' ]] (cont.) ...