Wednesday, October 22, 2008

No More Tears She Cries Comments

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She used to dance around the yard,
and get lost within her songs.
Until her life did turn for hard,
and everything went wrong.
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Saint Cynosure
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*Trusting You* 15 November 2008

More lovely now than was before, more smiles by passerby's. She lays alone in peaceful calm, no more tears she cries... good lines. I like this poem. good job. Becca

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Ency Bearis 22 October 2008

a lovely poem...touching verses..well written...A10 Ency Bearis

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Donna Nimmo 22 October 2008

Very beautiful and sad. A very nice dedication to a mother. Hugs, Donna

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