Thunder disturbed a mirage of peace; lightning painting
the sky, and his head felt severed from an explosion -
He was like an irregular lump on the hospital mattress
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Wow totally awesome in imagery innovatively captured in words! I admired the beginning lightning stanza and chuckled at lines such as frogs burping, all in freeverse! kudos poet! So nice to read u again! Hope u may read me too.
A wonderfully written poem, Richard. Thanks