Monday, July 2, 2007

No More Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

It started with random ramblings
So alone i would talk to the wall
My body giving in to wear and tear
And from my eyes the tears would fall
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 02 July 2007

Oh no you don`t go leaving just yet lady, that poet mind of yours will be missed, well if you love rain, move to England it never stops...10

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Indira Babbellapati 02 July 2007

it's very poignant and reads without a pause. i lv the last line. yap, i too miss the 'rain.' i

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