Wednesday, March 14, 2012

No More Of Me (Originally A Song Written By Me) Comments

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Smile on your face, he's all you talk about,
Tears down your face, where's that smile now,
Hearts are being broken; loving him is no more,
No use in trying to fight it, nothing left to fight for,
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Lady N
time smile sorry sympathy yeah
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Rajendran Muthiah 14 March 2012

You have unloaded from your heart an ocean of sorrow to the hearts of the readers. The last two lines occur thrice making the poem sentimental.

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Lady N

Lady N

Chicago, Illinois
Lady N
Lady N
Chicago, Illinois
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