No More Mistake Comments

no more in lines encore to bear as sorrows soar

Well I know how it felt because my life was just like this a few years ago and that was lost. It took me a while before the light of my life to help get on the right life.

A heartfelt plea for no more hassle and pain. Brilliant write!

A cry to get out of adverse situations in life. Nicely written..

This poem rendures a sad implemted on life i ownder if this is what you feel

Calm down...it's ok man. Give love nonstop...that's right. God is a force that we can't comprehend...so it's silly to think the bad guys win in the end...It's like saying a glass of coke will damage the entire sea forever. Nature's been here for BILLIONS of years...coca cola's only been here a little over a century.