Monday, October 21, 2019

No More Love Making Comments

Rating: 5.0

Between you and me there aren't stones,
Between you and me there are flowers,
Having sprung in the lovely showers,
Osteoporosis affected are my bones.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 03 November 2019

A nice poem to read, loved it.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 October 2019

A sweet and lovely poem that captures a strong and eternal love. Liked the opening stanza.. Very heartwarming Beautifully crafted and lovingly penned. Liked the picture of a wonderful and lovely couple.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 October 2019

Spare me with just a smile no more love making. old man who why not do let kids take a snap video 9 and make you a grand ole couple in the eyes of the world shine the man who introduced Homeopathy a German did love making at 90 why not you beat his record who has one and u have nothing to LOSE JASIR

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