Sunday, December 8, 2013

No More Claims! Comments

Rating: 5.0

A promise of word she keeps,
As she made to you long back dear,

The time had come to put a full stop here.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 18 January 2015

Nice emotional poem with great message of conviction and courage........Geetha........amazing write.......10

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Akhtar Jawad 15 September 2014

Today nothing is left in her hands, With an empty hands…. All she can pray for you and tell..... God bless you dear with all my heart! ! ! A poem giving a message of firm determination.

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Anish Chouhan 08 January 2014

Today nothing is left in her hands, With an empty hands…. superb

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 December 2013

With empty hands…. All she can pray for you Wishing well at the end. Nice write.

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Wahab Abdul 11 December 2013

congratulations! this became a hot poem from India.. kudos..

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 10 December 2013

what is the use of building the dreams of castles in the planet, when one can build a beautiful shrine in their hearts to greet the friends and loved one? and the only path we need is, pure love.. Anyway thank you for sharing your thoughts here..

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Soumita Sarkar 10 December 2013

a good stroke of pen..........

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 10 December 2013

No more claims. no more extra expectations. no more empty abilities. i have a special feeling to the verse: build a dream of castle. it is written so nicely. you are a talented gifted poet. i enjoyed this work so much.

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Dee Corpolongo 08 December 2013

A positive poem well enjoyed. Thank you! (and for your comments!)

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Kee Thampi 08 December 2013

My dearest poetess again writes......... Wishing you all the best, on your beautiful come back To build a dream of castles. Once again in this beautiful planet dear!

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Rubab Atwal 08 December 2013

An excellent poem, really enjoyed it.....

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

Kerala Palakkad
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