No More Claims! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar
No More Claims!
A promise of word she keeps,
As she made to you long back dear,
The time had come to put a full stop here.
One path ends here as
The board read the warning sign there.
So now,
No more trespassing will be done,
As she noted it down long back.
No more claim on this path
As it does not belongs to her dear.
This path for her ends here.
With a deep pain she wish to tell,
No more claims further ahead.
Reverting back to her next path thereby,
Wishing you all the best,
on your beautiful come back
To build a dream of castles.
Once again in this beautiful planet dear!
Today nothing is left in her hands,
With an empty hands….
All she can pray for you and tell.....
God bless you dear with all my heart! ! !
Dec 3,2013.
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Geetha Jayakumar.
No more claims. no more extra expectations. no more empty abilities. i have a special feeling to the verse: build a dream of castle. it is written so nicely. you are a talented gifted poet. i enjoyed this work so much.
A positive poem well enjoyed. Thank you! (and for your comments!)
My dearest poetess again writes......... Wishing you all the best, on your beautiful come back To build a dream of castles. Once again in this beautiful planet dear!
Nice emotional poem with great message of conviction and courage........Geetha........amazing write.......10
Today nothing is left in her hands, With an empty hands…. All she can pray for you and tell..... God bless you dear with all my heart! ! ! A poem giving a message of firm determination.
Today nothing is left in her hands, With an empty hands…. superb
With empty hands…. All she can pray for you Wishing well at the end. Nice write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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11/11/2025 7:35:13 PM # 1.0.0
what is the use of building the dreams of castles in the planet, when one can build a beautiful shrine in their hearts to greet the friends and loved one? and the only path we need is, pure love.. Anyway thank you for sharing your thoughts here..