Wednesday, December 24, 2014

No More But Never Forgotten Comments

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From one a second emerges.
There is no birth, no gestation, no planning

I always thought there was just me
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M.J. Lemon
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Valsa George 19 May 2018

That some one who already left still remains so live in your memory as an eternal presence! Though he/she gave you mixed experiences of joy and pain, you felt your life was a vacuum without him/her! He/She was an inalienable presence in your life! This is one of your best writes where you touch upon the intricacies of an emotional entanglement with another being, could be God Himself!

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Mj Lemon 20 May 2018

Valsa, thank you so very, very much.

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Richard Wlodarski 24 March 2017

Never ending Conversation With Higher Self Immortal love

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Mj Lemon 25 March 2017

Brilliant, Richard! I always did see my poem here as the tension that baser instincts could impose on the higher being, the higher self. Thank you so much!

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Loke Kok Yee 09 October 2015

It is a rough road Less for some But some have it more Important to endure.. Thanks for sharing

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Mj Lemon 09 October 2015

Thank you so very much. I am amazed how there are times when that is missed. Thanks again.

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Neela Nath Das 24 December 2014

Love is immortal, nothing can put out its flame.Very nice poem.

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